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Feedback

We showed our advertisement to our client to receive feedback so that we could make the appropriate changes to our advertisement. The feedback we received were as follows:

• The Narrator talks a bit to quickly, with changes in tone throughout, a different voice may help.
• "We at McDonalds are..." sounds better as just "McDonalds are...", since the "we" somewhat separates the audience from the company. 
• The background music is a bit too loud, and makes the narrator harder to hear
• The Campaign Message is not clear enough, changing the narrators lines or editing the visuals to make this clearer would help.
• One of the shots in the final half revealed too much of the table, when the main focus should be the burger. Remove this shot or cut it down so that the burger is the main focus.

McDonalds Advert